Any thoughts on that would be welcome. The biggest thing I learned while writing Rebellion is about characterization. Previously, I thought characterization meant having a unique voice, a personality, and having interesting things happen. I’m now much more aware of the need to both make characters somewhat relatable, and do have a character arc or story separate from the main narrative. This is going to be the main thing I work on during Elfish Descent. As an example, I am really not very satisfied with how the Katerei and Gorath storyline played out. I fell into the Shyamalan trap of having a twist for the twists sake. By the time I got to chapter 11 or so, I realized that the big reveal that Kat and Gor were spies would have little to no pay off. What I should have done was make that clear up front, have Kat and Gor slowly begin to doubt their mission as they grew closer to Jeanette, before finally making the decision to defect and come clean. Meanwhile, Jeanette would be growing. My nighty had pulled up, over my waist. I rubbed my pussy lips on my dad's leg. The next time the thunder boomed I crawled on top of him. I could feel his cock stretching up, toward his navel."I'm so scared Daddy, hold me tighter."I softly pressed my pussy on my dad's cock. His hand slid down my bare back and over my bottom. I shook in mock fear and rubbed my pussy on him with each successive clap of thunder. His hips undulated beneath me."Daddy, I'm thirsty." Then go get a drink of water." I'm scared to go alone, you come with me." He reached for the light but I grabbed his hand."Let's find our way in the dark. It'll be fun."We got out of bed and headed down the hall in the darkness. I wrapped my arms around his waist and pressed my breast into his arm. Thunder clapped and my dad put his hand on my breast. His gentle squeezing was so nice. He softly turned my nipple in his fingers.Our eyes adjusted to the dark. When we got to the kitchen he turned on the faucet and poured a glass of.
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